Beautiful colours. Here you just hat to find the drama on it, the passion, the simple gesture that captures the eyes. You can do a lot better. Please try.
Here, you must lost some time next shot and look for the best angle, for instance, just take a tripod, wait for the sunset and, please, don't cut the trees in the foreground, they were the first step for the distance.
I love it Coffy, but for the potential of it, not because of you shot; your light is very hard, you don't wait and you don't arrive there early in the morning, you just go there. And you need to go down and use a tripod to have good results. The light, Coffy, study it. I believe in you. You go there, that's the beginning.